/authors/mike/ Recent content in Mike on Utopia Stories Library Hugo en-us /stories/46078/ Mon, 01 Jan 0001 00:00:00 +0000 /stories/46078/ <p><em><strong>Author's Note:</strong> This is my first attempt. I am almost finished with another story so, any and all suggestions are appreciated. Please rate and Critique so I can fine tune the next one coming soon. Thank you.</em></p> <p>_<em>Update (2012/03/02):</em>* I made the paragraphs manageable and broke the story into 2 parts. Please rate and leave comments. Thank you!!*</p> <p><strong>Chapter 1</strong> <em>(updated: 2012/03/02)</em></p> <p>Not so long ago in a bedroom not so far away&hellip;.</p>